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Open Poetry #29

Minuteman March

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-11-18 04:23 PM

H
O
W    Does one tell?

W
H
E
R
E    Do we fail?

W
H
Y    Do we fight?

W
H
E
N   Do we come to realise...

W
H
A
T   Do we do to change.

How does one tell,
that things aren't going well?
Where do we fail?
Why do we fight endless wars?
When do we come to realise,
that we are often wrong?
What do we do to change?
Do we really need change.

        How Where Why When What
        The reason is in the rhyme

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2003-11-18 04:29 PM

Kellie,
A clever way to get our attention for such big ideas. I appreciated this write.
Sadelite

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2003-11-18 04:32 PM

Sadelite: Thank You. There are many big ideas that I say here, but where do I stand? and How do I stand? Why do I stand? When do I take that stand further? What is my stand exactly? Its what it all comes down too. Right?

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2003-11-18 06:39 PM

Yes, I agree with sadelite, an extremely clever way to grab the reader. Enjoyed the read.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-11-18 06:44 PM

"Do we really need change?"

Oh Kelly...
how could we possibly live
without it?

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

5 posted 2003-11-20 10:28 AM

Thank You

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

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