Open Poetry #29 |
Falling apart together |
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Spinning backwards Catching pieces Of you Falling through space Wishing for rewind Finding only Nightmare Of fast forward I love you Now so trite Watching you come apart Hiding in the corner Humpty Dumpty Falls off the wall And the King's men Are all stoned I want your pain I scream Echoing off The hollow remnant Of a wild child That made love In Central Park With full audience Trying to catch pieces Of you I fall apart Sitting in your dark corner Flying through space |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Hiding in the corner Humpty Dumpty Falls off the wall And the King's men Are all stoned" Seems to be the story of my life sometimes....Loved that! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God in Heaven Brad I have no clue how you do this . . . but please dont stop amazing God amazing lines feel as if I have tipped off of a wall myself *smile* xxoo |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Wow, this is an incredible write! I know this experience all too well. Keeping this one. ~K~ |
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Magic Solias Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 73California, USA |
Great piece. Always like them like that. A keeper. |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
nicely done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
'click' into the library |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brad~ 'Trying to catch pieces Of you I fall apart' I feel this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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