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Lost Inside You
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Lost Inside You |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Night tranquil behind God’s eyes Where our hearts reside Within so engaging a table Arranging diamond plates An exquisite collection Exploring truth and beauty In happy hours before my eyes Answering a ready look Lending fair hues…encouragement I am weak without you Nuzzling the corners of evening Soothing overwhelming tea They say fear is from loneliness… I am unsure…though you are critical in my life Love presents two sides, physical and spiritual Where union takes pride Like a night cap, you embrace my mind Warmth, light forms, tempered, you man of music Formulated assertions, oh, how could I ignore? Forget such moments…we wept and prayed Blank verses spent into time complete Listening to silent seas and they’re endless cavities Of silkweed wreaths, you’ve attempted and succeeded I am hopelessly in love for all time, seasons Improving such a fanciful notion, carried on the Winds of instance…to you and all lovers of the world Sentiments like the kiss of roses Sparkle from your eyes, my jewels of fresh themes Repeatedly accent and embracing prose romantic I am lost within you |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
They say fear is from loneliness… I am unsure…though you are critical in my life Love presents two sides, physical and spiritual Where union takes pride you could write the subject fo these two lines forever.. so broad and wide is the possibilities, yet you weave them into a small part of the whole and let the reader draw them out for themselves... enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I am hopelessly in love for all time, seasons Improving such a fanciful notion, carried on the Winds of instance…to you and all lovers of the world Sentiments like the kiss of roses Sparkle from your eyes, my jewels of fresh themes Repeatedly accent and embracing prose romantic I am lost within you Wonderful Lee..just amazing. Chris  |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
wonderful |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Speechless... |
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