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Open Poetry #29

Oh, Say, Can You See What I See?

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-11-18 12:04 PM

autumn
leaves play tag
across the patio
as Chinook breezes
enliven their moves

then pause
momentarily
to rest
before their
game ensues

©November 18, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-11-18 12:07 PM

haven't seen you in awhile

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-11-18 12:18 PM

Very nice Virginia..
It is SO good to read you again!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-11-18 12:21 PM

Enjoyed.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2003-11-18 12:22 PM

Thank you, all, and "Enchantress," it is wonderful to be read again!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2003-11-18 12:40 PM

Beautifully simple, yet exquisitely beautiful--the essence of elegance.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-11-18 02:14 PM

Gosh, it's great to finally see you posting again! This was wonderful!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-11-18 03:31 PM

Good to see you, Virginia. It's windy all over, I do believe. See if you can catch 'em...

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

8 posted 2003-11-18 04:08 PM

A good poem describes.
A fine poem captures.

Nice catch!

~~J

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