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Open Poetry #29

Oral Eclipse

wandering glider
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since 2001-04-04

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aloft

0 posted 2003-11-09 09:31 PM

A red moon appeared.

Imagine the stories told,

never written down.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-11-09 10:05 PM

Brilliant!!!!

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-11-09 10:12 PM

WanderingGlider~
This is just WONDERFUL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-09 10:15 PM

I love it!!!!!!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-11-09 10:17 PM

I love this, too!!
Hugs

Ethel

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2003-11-09 10:26 PM

imagine the words....

I really enjoyed this view of the red moon....
Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2003-11-18 03:02 PM

wandering glider,
   Reflective. Much enjoyed.
   Incidently, thank you for your comments about my post, Diamante of Leaves.  There you will find a response.  I like your thinking.
                               Sadelite

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (11-18-2003 03:06 PM).]

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

7 posted 2003-11-18 04:10 PM

I admit, I came for the title -- but I stayed for an ethereally beautiful poem.

~~J

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