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Open Poetry #29

A Winter Game

Kazm
Member

since 2003-11-13

Posts 99

0 posted 2003-11-17 03:32 PM

A Winter Game

Leaves are gray now,
not even a respectable brown.
the rain detects this breach,
hissing disappointment
that its work is done already.
Easy to say God's doing this,
pretend it isn't a lie,
easy to play the contentment game,
take what life gives,
forego the responsible course,
to give only what it takes.

Kaz Murakami

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-11-17 03:33 PM

well done

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2003-11-17 04:06 PM

I've been waiting to read more of your work... and this was worth the wait. *S*

easy to play the contentment game,
take what life gives,
forego the responsible course,
to give only what it takes.

Your words are wise ones... and are written beautifully! *S*

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-11-17 05:11 PM

Oh yes, I like this!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

4 posted 2003-11-17 06:58 PM

much enjoyed

)

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

5 posted 2003-11-18 04:02 PM

Truer than true, rookie! Good write.

~~J

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