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Touching Whispers
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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I am within reach, touching those whispers sent to me.. How do I forget such eyes that held me close? In reflection - the stars seemed to burn through me with no remorse. I could never look at the sky the same again. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahh Meg kind of like not listening to the same music again this is lovely writing xxoo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
see..your words are there to touch...even if in whispers M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This leaves me with a haunting sensation, Meghan. I like it very much. Short, concise...and memorable. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"How do I forget such eyes that held me close?" Meg~When you find the answer let me know?  "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...perfectly beautiful! Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I am within reach, touching those whispers sent to me.. How do I forget such eyes that held me close? In reflection - the stars seemed to burn through me with no remorse. I could never look at the sky the same again such moments or memories do not allow us to see the same way we once did. Sometimes we see further, sometimes we close our eyes and refuse to see anything again... nicely done Lady... nice indeed.. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
You have a knack for sending your words straight to everyone's heart! Enjoyed your post... Sadelite |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
No, you may never look at the stars the same way again. However, when another love comes your way, you may look upon them with even more joy...  Meghan, your words caress ~ yet touch deeply. To love & starlight, Linda |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Came back, read this again..lol.. and realized I was re-writing it in my head... subtle changes that add nothing to the way you wrote it, just translating into my own words and style... I always consider that a sign that something in the piece echoed my own thoughts or experiences.. and have to make it personal... point of all that... don't ever think you don't reach people with your words... you do |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
BUMP! Back tot he top this goes. Loved it! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
something tells me, you my dear are being groomed for your ultimate soul mate...and let me tell you...he'd better by darn appreciate you!!!! Smiles and hugs |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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