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Open Poetry #29

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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-11-18 09:57 PM

I knew that moment
that your sexy eyes glanced down
your next words were lies

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (11-18-2003 09:58 PM).]

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2003-11-18 10:03 PM

Powerful in it's conciseness.

believe in what your heart feels...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-11-18 10:06 PM

Yes, as the old song says, "you can't hide your lyin' eyes." Well done. Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2003-11-19 01:10 AM

simply and beautifully stated and observed..
lovely
enjoyed this

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!

beckers716
Junior Member

since 2003-11-16

Posts 39
Ohio

4 posted 2003-11-19 02:14 AM

Beautifully stated

Only when all hope seems lost, can you hope to find yourself

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-19 04:02 AM

ouch

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-11-19 08:53 AM

Well stated!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2003-11-19 12:01 PM

Short and powerful!

Eric

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