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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-11-17 07:08 PM


Kiss me Emeraldo

Emeraldo told me, "It's the quality of the stone
that makes all the difference in the world to me."
She said "It's the quality that provides the beauty
and it's this beauty that my eyes yearn to see."
And so the smile on her face could not be erased
as she took in the pleasures of quality.
Like a finely trained jeweler she knew how to
caress my heart and she did it skillfully.
I confess, that Emeraldo's tenderness, awakened
sensual fires of desire within the heart of me.
And so, I gave into her tender touch,
and so we kissed.....passionately.

JamesLee
November15
2003

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scorpio
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1 posted 2003-11-17 07:59 PM


A very passionate write,James.

believe in what your heart feels...

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2 posted 2003-11-17 08:07 PM


Sensual & warm as ever James! Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-11-18 06:04 PM


Thank you scorpio and Nightshade for the nice remarks...James
Magic Solias
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4 posted 2003-11-18 08:35 PM


As difficult as it is to translate feelings into words, you have done a masterful job.  Feelings are so fleeting, and your words make them more permanent.  It shines.
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