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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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As If I ignored the voice that whispered to me of pattering rain as if I could hear anything that was above the rumble of thunder it’s heat swept hot asphalt with a stinging smell erasing what was once there |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well said Helen... you have always written with an ease of imagery that I appreciated... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
Oh this is so very good. I will remember this picture for a long time. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Let's hope that what it brings is better than what was once there. It most often is, you know. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Understandable.... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
ouch, barefoot on hot asphalt. Ouch! You have such a nice wording. I always enjoy reading what you've written, even though it's bittersweet at times. Sadie |
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