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0 posted 2003-11-17 05:43 AM


Father Time

the grey blue stain of creeping time awaits
the last lingering ray of light to fade
with the fall of autumn, leaves
a golden season of decay.

Resistance

Not summer, winter, spring;
Autumn on the hardened blocks.

Defiant greens linger still.
The last ray of light is failing.


Rawr, rawr, rawr

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1 posted 2003-11-17 09:02 AM



Andrew, so good to see you,
and this lovely gift, for us.

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2 posted 2003-11-17 09:06 AM


very nice...

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3 posted 2003-11-17 12:32 PM


Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2003-11-17 12:38 PM


Long time no read! Hi, Andrew! I enjoyed the delightful spin to this seasonal poem!


EA

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