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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-11-17 11:40 AM


I am hurled into a world of deep tones and thoughts
Dancing up and down, in accord with changing currents
Insipid harshness of cool changing winds
Secures adaptations drumming up conflicts
Checking my watch, arguing the assault
Within our world as arched language opens doors

Vacant with vales, corrupted while watching our screens
Who’d have ever thought we be conditioned by TV?
How I learn to whistle along with oil and flames
I should stop worrying about any life misshapen
For the salt less breeze blows in true breath fearless
Designing our paths immense with accurate grit

I pause, listening to the woodlands thinking
Within a helpless hour, suddenly grown sure
How we steel markets of white dreams and perfumes
With their ivory toes which occupies heavens’ ceiling
Reminding me to re-read everything

Shifting from one foot to anther I await my turn
Feeling the light spring rain falling stubborn
In a mirrored pool of the brilliance of dawn
I know the helm will be like the birth of a fawn

I hear iron hoofs sparking in the distance
With an entourage of arrivals and a sensory resilience
What a day, from nose level, sounds of choric utterance
Strange human birds….each named in expressions fearsome
Where muscles of dexterity quotes our passages, gentle voiced
Emotions paint their own origins, desires our passage light & moist
Dreams fly in the form of features, where I read myself
Formed structures, defined scenery, where my heart becomes your home

Shall we break the boundaries of our skin, occupy each other’s side
Followed by intuition, of conversations come alive
Our hearts lift, our thoughts become birds of space
The great tongue of literature, never before embraced
Pressing against the walls of my breast and inner core
Remarkably, this is the day that will never be the same
Take me unto the flesh of instance and soft betrayal
For I’ll convulse not
Nor encroach death’s silence
But like a child, small and smooth
With great heart, our words unite fleshy tissue
Transversed by duel currents


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-11-17 12:09 PM


LeeJ,
Now that is a mouth full, excellent, enjoyed.

aujussy wolf
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2 posted 2003-11-17 01:06 PM


truly a masterpiece , it would take me a year to write all that , and so many different strong words ... well described miss , lovely
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