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Sweet Words |
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Magic Solias Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 73California, USA |
SWEET WORDS I felt like a tree cut into half like a banana-tree bent by its overweight of ripe bananas at a tropically warm humid late August night Wine flew off the roof of monster-house its eyes watching me devouring my innocence pushing me closer to madness how can I continue to live thus or even not thus I don’t want to even think about- just rather numb I be, untouchable not spoken to un-understood I float just inside a blue red cloud up here the skies turn blue but shine yellow I deflate my wings and donate all unused clothes to fox news station thankfully acknowledging fair, unbalanced right-wing rock concert TV we celebrate insanity and violence disqualifies we dance straight in circles and not now is time left to remember weird late night walks to unknown dirty places I fear are not too far from where I came. Now sweet music tries to waken, shaken me and all I do is write this word End. Magic Solias |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Interesting. I like it. :-) |
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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
quite unique, as if language is a workout....well done |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
The end,...well done. Jason |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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