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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-09-25 03:59 PM



Faded blue
worn in by skin
cotton that fit mine
so well
borrowed blue
half of marriage
smelt like home and you
the way it should be

Creased comfort
smoothing the lines
frayed lengths tickle spine
iron me out
I don't fit the clothes
or the feeling

that belonged with
and to you

I think

I'm here to give them back.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-09-25 04:09 PM



Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-09-25 04:19 PM


GemmaGal~
You write the heart so tenderly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-09-25 04:34 PM


Gemma, I love this one. It's really
good, even if it is sad.

Hugs, my friend  
Ethel Mae

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-09-25 04:37 PM


Oh Jesus . . .
this one hit home
*seriously holding
back tears*

positive yes, but bittersweet
beautiful, as always gem
xxoo

QjQ
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5 posted 2003-09-25 05:49 PM


well expressed,,,

                                                       

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-09-25 11:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, this is so beautifully heartaching, sweet friend, I send many angel healing hugs your way to ease your heart! (sad sigh) May you gently leave those bad thoughts at his doorstep and walk away quietly in pursuit of what your golden heart deserves, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

angelblueyes
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7 posted 2003-09-25 11:35 PM


I send you many angel hugs.
Crystal

Kandi
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8 posted 2003-09-26 03:04 PM


That was so incredibly amazing. You express your feelings so beautifully. Felt this one the whole way through.
Going in my library.
-Kristin

Kandi
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9 posted 2003-09-26 03:06 PM


I should probably check the Library option, ay?
LeeJ
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10 posted 2003-09-26 03:06 PM


good one Gemmie, thank you always for your wise and tender words.
Cpat Hair
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11 posted 2003-09-26 03:09 PM


hmmmm hope you took something with you to wear home...

might have gotten chilled not to say arrested other wise


Aenimal
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12 posted 2003-09-26 10:09 PM


you're on fire TF
passing shadows
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13 posted 2003-11-14 12:58 PM


sigh
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