Open Poetry #29 |
Borrowed and never returned |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Faded blue worn in by skin cotton that fit mine so well borrowed blue half of marriage smelt like home and you the way it should be Creased comfort smoothing the lines frayed lengths tickle spine iron me out I don't fit the clothes or the feeling that belonged with and to you I think I'm here to give them back. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GemmaGal~ You write the heart so tenderly~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, I love this one. It's really good, even if it is sad. Hugs, my friend Ethel Mae |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh Jesus . . . this one hit home *seriously holding back tears* positive yes, but bittersweet beautiful, as always gem xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
well expressed,,,
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, this is so beautifully heartaching, sweet friend, I send many angel healing hugs your way to ease your heart! (sad sigh) May you gently leave those bad thoughts at his doorstep and walk away quietly in pursuit of what your golden heart deserves, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I send you many angel hugs. Crystal |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
That was so incredibly amazing. You express your feelings so beautifully. Felt this one the whole way through. Going in my library. -Kristin |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
I should probably check the Library option, ay? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
good one Gemmie, thank you always for your wise and tender words. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hmmmm hope you took something with you to wear home... might have gotten chilled not to say arrested other wise |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you're on fire TF |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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