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PouringJewels
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0 posted 2003-11-15 04:47 AM



         Now that I have to face reality
         There is one story and one story only,
         that will prove worth my telling.

         I've searched for the words
         and ran from the truth.
         I've found emptiness,sorrow, and hurt.
  
         But still there is hope.
         I've found imaginary love,
         available kindness,and extended memories.

         I have no fullfillment from running.
         This story has no ending untill I
         stop running and worry only tomarrow.

                    If it comes.

© Copyright 2003 Julia - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-11-15 08:05 AM



It comes.
Because hope remains.
Write your story, dear.
I'm looking forward
to the read.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-11-15 08:08 AM


PouringJewels,
You are not the first, enjoyed the read.


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-11-15 09:41 AM


Julia~
Tomorrow will come~

This is in-depth writing~
Excellent~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

PouringJewels
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4 posted 2003-11-15 10:40 AM


Marge, You promise?
wranx
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5 posted 2003-11-15 11:06 AM


Well Sis, For good or ill, tomorrows DO come. They always have and always will, until the day there is no need for one.

It looks like you are doing the same thing that I did...writing out as much "phmuhh" as I could reach.

Love ya Jewels!

Broher Ed

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6 posted 2003-11-15 11:41 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Know when hope exists, there's always tomorrow, for hope builds bridges that are possible to cross any chasm! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel comfort hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

PouringJewels
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7 posted 2003-11-15 11:49 AM


Noah, You are always such a happy person. Can you give this old lady a hint of your high?
littlewing
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8 posted 2003-11-15 05:18 PM


Julia?

look at what I found from tomorrow
*smile*

it DOES come
I didnt think so either
had to be CONVINCED of it even
for many months
Beautiful writing
and
SusieQ
xxoo

Bec
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9 posted 2003-11-15 09:33 PM


Tomorrow always comes, whether we want it to or not... just ask a university student who has a paper due tomorrow!

Hope your tomorrow will be just how you want it to be.

Bec

"I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20

Magic Solias
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10 posted 2003-11-15 10:41 PM


" I have no fullfillment from running.
   This story has no ending untill I
   stop running and worry only tomarrow."

This one is a mind-bender when read carefully.  But do you have to stop running in order to only worry tom.?  The deeper truth you hint at, might it be the awareness of death?  We cannot run from it forever, so we should really stop running, relax and worry tom.  So, be fearless and live a long fulfilled life free of worry and full of happiness.  I hope your imaginary love will become real.

Magic Solias

"we dream to love and love to dream"

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