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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Now that I have to face reality There is one story and one story only, that will prove worth my telling. I've searched for the words and ran from the truth. I've found emptiness,sorrow, and hurt. But still there is hope. I've found imaginary love, available kindness,and extended memories. I have no fullfillment from running. This story has no ending untill I stop running and worry only tomarrow. If it comes. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It comes. Because hope remains. Write your story, dear. I'm looking forward to the read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PouringJewels, You are not the first, enjoyed the read. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julia~ Tomorrow will come~ This is in-depth writing~ Excellent~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Marge, You promise? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well Sis, For good or ill, tomorrows DO come. They always have and always will, until the day there is no need for one. It looks like you are doing the same thing that I did...writing out as much "phmuhh" as I could reach. Love ya Jewels! Broher Ed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Know when hope exists, there's always tomorrow, for hope builds bridges that are possible to cross any chasm! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel comfort hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Noah, You are always such a happy person. Can you give this old lady a hint of your high? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Julia? look at what I found from tomorrow *smile* it DOES come I didnt think so either had to be CONVINCED of it even for many months Beautiful writing and  SusieQ xxoo |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Tomorrow always comes, whether we want it to or not... just ask a university student who has a paper due tomorrow! Hope your tomorrow will be just how you want it to be. Bec  "I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20 |
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Magic Solias Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 73California, USA |
" I have no fullfillment from running. This story has no ending untill I stop running and worry only tomarrow." This one is a mind-bender when read carefully. But do you have to stop running in order to only worry tom.? The deeper truth you hint at, might it be the awareness of death? We cannot run from it forever, so we should really stop running, relax and worry tom. So, be fearless and live a long fulfilled life free of worry and full of happiness. I hope your imaginary love will become real. Magic Solias |
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