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Open Poetry #29

You ( Jesus )

Green
New Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 3
KL , Malaysia

0 posted 2003-11-15 02:11 PM

i hate to live
i hate to die

you are the one i loved
you are the one i hated

  you made me relieved
   you made me endured

    you are the reason i lived
     you are the reason i grieved

      you made me satisfied
       you made me emptied

  i want to love
   i want to hate

you are the truth
that i elude
you are my everything
that i evade

now that i have learnt
the fact
me & you

the truth
is the faith
the lie
is to die

embrace me
i need your warmth
receive me
i want growth

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-11-15 02:18 PM

Welcome to PIP .. Provoking first post....

Kindly~

~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-15-2003 02:25 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-11-15 02:24 PM

(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a most beautiful first post here in Open, know Jesus sacrificed Himself to save us all and He will always be there for you, so always hold onto the faith, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Claribel, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Claribel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-15-2003 02:25 PM).]

Green
New Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 3
KL , Malaysia

3 posted 2003-11-15 10:22 PM

thanks for the comments .
i'll write more if ... i have the inspiration from the RIGHT source .

living for the truth .

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