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Fire Fairy
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0 posted 2003-11-15 12:20 PM



Oh luscious love adorns me with your scent.

I escaped from his desire
And my own
Years left in the past now
And now
Now I am feeling sorrow for the loss of this love
And the realisation that I want to experience him in his entirety once more
However released from the vicious grip of attachment and expectations
I want the wildness in his eyes to invoke me
I want the desperateness of his lips to join with mine to follow me again the way they used to
Mischievous and inseparable
Lust trailing behind us like scattered stars and dust fallen from the moons power
Oh your embrace left me weak!
The first lover that made me feel THAT feeling
Shaky and vulnerable
An open vessel
A harbor that your ship made its home for a short, yet sweet spring

And now it is not the past but the present
And I want to see you and I in our future
Not in our past
I want to experience brief bliss in your arms
And taste the tantalizing temptation of your kisses
Oh your kisses are like none I have ever known!

But time can pass
And change things immeasurably
You may have gone in a totally different direction
And the old news of a past fling with me once again may turn you from that direction
Oh but If I had my way we shall meet again
So sweetly
And so soon
And revel in the sweetness of our fiery passion
And you would swim in endless admiration for me
That’s what I loved about our lust
You desired me and delighted in the achievement of having your desire returned
You watched me while I slept
Admiring my beauty
No other has taken the time (or thought I was beautiful!)
Or enjoyed to sacrifice sleep for a gaze at the grace of me during slumber!
Oh, please may this desire be reignited once more
And may you see me and fall into the abyss that you were once in
And may I fall to the luscious languid landscapes of our lust.

Will we ever meet again?


© Copyright 2003 Charlotte - All Rights Reserved
Fire Fairy
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1 posted 2003-11-15 12:37 PM


This is really old, but these feelings have reignited themselves again!

Enjoy.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-11-15 12:39 PM


No other has taken the time (or thought I was beautiful!)

That's very real, and so pretty.

I have dreamt like this before,
but after the longing it hurts all the more.

I hope the feelings are mutual
and you can get it back~

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10
Posts 205
California
3 posted 2003-11-15 01:02 PM


And revel in the sweetness of our fiery passion
And you would swim in endless admiration for me
That’s what I loved about our lust

Beautiful words!

Thank you

WildPoet

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-11-15 01:07 PM


Fire Fairy
Not in that first sense, but seconds is prety good. LOL

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-11-15 01:37 PM




(sigh) Lust I believe I can be tempered somehow, and if lust is simply used as a driving force to love, then I don't see it as a sin! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderfully passionate, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charlotte, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-11-15 01:47 PM


beautiful write
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