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Open Poetry #29

one for the boys in the lab

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2003-11-15 12:12 PM

running hard in clutch of wheel
amazing how we are the same
vascular autonomy
the squeak you hear is not my voice
medicine in beaker feed
give me just a golden drop
pink tongue lapping up the need
check my rat tongue for a pulse
with a teeny bit of thus
amazing
we are different
cartoons call to feed me cheese
knowing that
sends change in me
not so different it seems
clutching at the wheels...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-11-15 12:28 PM

Nothing like spinning our wheels
while taking a bite out of the big cheese.
You give new meaning to changing the pace,
it's funny how so much remains the same though.

Laughter is truly the best medicine,
and it feels so good don't it!!

Liked your title, loved your poem Serenity~

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

2 posted 2003-11-15 12:54 PM

very, very cool

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

3 posted 2003-11-15 02:25 PM

" which one of us...
takes a turn on the old treadmill?
who hides his head...
pretending to sleep?"---J.tull

yep...
hug you

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-11-15 02:39 PM

(sigh) This also reminded me of Jethro Tull so very well, dearest friend, just love the deep matter of your writing as always, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-11-16 12:06 PM

well done

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-11-17 09:30 AM

Good for you K
you know I was just telling Ed you remind me of Grace Slick (when she was cool, of course) and if your words were ever put to music it would to Tull or Deep Purple
Love you Lady
xxoo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-11-17 09:44 AM

Karen, you know that I love your writing.....
this was no exception!!

Love ya, my friend

Ethel

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