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portrait of un-simple grief
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portrait of un-simple grief |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Watch her corners wrinkling diminishing eliptical sirens shrieking blue on blue as her stoic fades to black... Hands are feathered fans on face spans bewitch a fingered spread keening in the rhythmic need peaking through the overgrowth parting fronds of a palm's pain never never love again slibble down one side of chin she nods as if she knew... |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
We do let forage grow to high. Most don't see through it. Good thoughts! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've held my head just so... well done, m'dear. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my! Very well done indeed! Love ya lady! Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Ah...but she didn't nod stoicly and she knows that loves hope beats deep in her and she ain't going down that easy! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, tis is a powerful portrait, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
You have a raw passion that I don't think I could ever match.  enjoyed...and here is a trip to the top for you.  "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
You have a raw passion that I don't think I could ever match. enjoyed...and here is a trip to the top for you. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
and "simple" grief would be . . . ??? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
simple grief would be flushing your goldfish down the toilet. un-simple grief is losing half your family in three years. Thanks for your understanding. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
nice write |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
oh baby....... raw scream honest as blood holding you.. so so powerful |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh...Karen?... Just hugs... and lots of love...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
rushing over with Vicky to give more hugs |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I do know what you mean... in my own way... Like 10 people in the last three years alone for me... to you, hang on!Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So deep the expose of the inner shadow, as opposites enlighten, and sorrow recognizes it's twin in joy. Wonderful write. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You reached in and grabbed my solar plexus with this, yet another, brilliant write. When you write, words are living things! One cannot read a poem of yours and walk away unaffected. Peace, Love, Harmony ~ & Eternal Life, Healing hugs, Linda |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K . . looking through those fronds, I stand beside you . . I do Loss seems like a recurring theme in my life xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (11-17-2003 09:35 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, this hurts...and I do understand.....  Hugs to you, my friend Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Came back...just to give you a... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Karen... This I understand...and wish I didn't. I love you lady "if you won't let me fall for you |
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