Open Poetry #29 |
masquerading moments (thanx to wranx) |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lighter than Hummingbird feather SHE is Magic falls in gentle caress floating within verbs singing adjectives dressed in new meanings she stirs the cauldrons brings up from bottom’s deep new hope she knows the four winds dressed in blue brings kisses of gold tempered with silvery dewdrops moist moments to wet lips parched by dried tears taste the taste of awe as she fills your cup to overflowing with streams of unconsciousness dancing and twirling endlessly ‘neath splendorous starry skies or darkest ebony night beware the hidden smile of dove enfolded within cupped hands waiting to be released into your night dreams [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (11-14-2003 12:56 PM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
She flies! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hi Kacy! Glad you could come to this "fancy dress" dance. I have to tell you...I see m'Love writing here. And? oddly, I see her writing of m'Witch... If this was your intent, it is nothing but brilliant! If not, please understand that I see Susie in everything. It's a beautiful poem regardless. Thanks Kacy |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yer eyes are keen as an owl's you score 11 out of 10 possible as usual |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Kacy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you sure bring so much more than masquerades upon these pages, you bring floods of poetic passion and inspiration to us all! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! May love and lght always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
WOW, A masquerade within a masqerade (kind of)...Thank you! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
KC~ this is really stunning....such a wonderful write from you.... Lauren~ ~~**~~ i carry your heart with me |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kacy? this is so amazing, My God if this IS me , you are writing me writing K . . how cool you are so awesome . . . I thank you for this *smile* Didnt think I had a style? you write me better than me ahahah thank you xxoo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I see a blending of witches, methinks... just right for such a ball. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you clever, clever poet you! shaking my head... this is messing with my mind. (not that THAT is a challenge) Captured littlewing? No, you did this fabulously, just let her fly her way. And I am blushing furiously at the flattering inclusion of moi, here. That's it. I am officially intimidated by this challenge. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
yes i'm with ed, some some Sue no doubt but there was a mix of le witch but then they are sisters..grin |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Wait, I see the both of us, like you took the styles and wrote us both into one OMG you are brilliant , yes Kari is right and Raph Damn Kacy xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'll pass on guessing..lol... but the piece reminds me of at least two writers.... nicely done |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, I'm not sure if this is like Sue or Karen, but it is certainly a beautiful poem. I loved reading it. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Methinks a Pipsters poetic masquerade in REAL time some day would be an event to remember forever. Thanx wranx, this was truly a lot of fun! Truth be told, I simply let the magic fall from my muse in the sky. I personally never really write anything worth reading and often have to go back into the archives to read what the midnitesun posted. As for Karen and Sue? Your poetic styles are both so incredibly beautiful, it's easy to become totally immersed in your words. Thanks to both of you for letting me put together this composite. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG you are such a sweet soul Kacy . . . thank you God, OK now you have to go see my new post and dont hit me *smile* xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Don't hit? LOL, OK, I'll go read but I only have a few minutes online time tonight, so I hope I find 'the new one' before I have to leave. I am delighted you two ladies and Ed enjoyed this write. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is very cool.....this one has to almost be one of my favorites I've read of yours Kacy!!! I need to consistently spend more time here at Passions!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This bit of witch and a little bit of wing, sure worked for me! This is outstanding Kacy! Truly is! You were like a maestro taking over the instruments of an orchestra's principle musicians! ~ and playing them very, very well! Magnifico! Brava! Encore! Your choice of players was superb! to all three of you! EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-17-2003 02:06 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks for reading, glad that you liked this one Bridgette! Linda, smiling here. These two have styles that just seemed to 'clone' themselves as twin sisters. LOL. All I had to do was clone a temporary third sister entity, not completely re-create. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (11-17-2003 07:57 AM).] |
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