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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-11-14 10:54 PM



A dilemma?
not so different from this
feeble attempt by OUR country
to prosecute criminal behavior
occurred
recurred

I concur . . .

Let me rephrase that

Scales to be weighed
outweigh truth and justice
The capitalization
stems from two (2) counts

Count them, yes too
buried in Red Herring
propaganda to prosecute

Or did I mean persecute?


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Please see this atrocity :   http://www.msnbc.com/news/980078.asp?0si=-

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-15-2003 06:44 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-14 11:52 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This is very disturbing and atrocious indeed, and all because of this they only have to offer the children more fear that perhaps there's more coldblooded killers out there and nowhere seems safe! (sad sigh) I only hope this gets resolved soon, sweet friend there's issues far more important outside of court that the children musn't hear, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

wranx
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2 posted 2003-11-14 11:56 PM


Turnabout seems fairplay...

You've not only written her....You've probably sent her off on a quest. LOL

Very nice m'love, she'll love this!

"In looking Northward, I see a light"


BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-11-14 11:59 PM


Hey tweets, I'm thinking this is Raph,
plus one or two more verses for good measure.

But I know nothing about propaganda~  

Whatever the mask, you wear it well.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-11-15 02:04 AM


Is this Kacy, Sue? Anyway, it's good!!
littlewing
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5 posted 2003-11-15 03:42 AM


Thanks guys . .  
Ed yes thank you
Lori , nope
Ethel  . . . I'll never tell
*smile*

thanks guys
Hope SHE likes
xxoo

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-11-15 06:49 AM



I didn't see the name Lady Justice on
Ed's roster of names to be played
in the Masquerade, my guess would be Kacy,
as well.

And if so...you nailed her.

Well done, m'dear!

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-11-15 07:56 AM


if thats not midnitesun,
im not the inkedgoddess

very well done, and im sure she knows of it already, first to wrong the rights and right the wrongs......

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-11-15 05:15 PM


mann I cant hide nothing from you guys
*smile*

thank you everyone
was a toughie to do
was an honor to see through
eyes that shine so brightly
xxoo

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9 posted 2003-11-15 11:20 PM


hope this exercise didn't give you any nightmares.
Thank you! for wearing my midnitevision goggles for a while.

And as for this trial? it promises to be another media circus, and all the families involved will have to suffer through the judicial/media maze, wondering where JUSTICE comes into the picture.
Ok, I'll step away from the mike for now.

littlewing
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10 posted 2003-11-16 12:19 PM


LMAO . . look at you go . . .
and yes, I know . .
Kacy thank you , was nice having a
voice for a day *smile*
My honor, glad you liked
xxoo

vlraynes
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11 posted 2003-11-16 02:25 AM



Sue...this is excellent!

You really did write her perfectly,
and I love what you did with it.

And?...for the record?...
you ALWAYS have a voice...smile

Love you, sis...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

littlewing
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12 posted 2003-11-16 04:23 PM


Thanks Vic, uhh when are you gonna do one, huh?

*smile*
xxoo

vlraynes
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13 posted 2003-11-16 04:54 PM



LOL...I'm having enough trouble writing as ME
right now...but...I won't rule it out.

I'll give it some thought and see if
anything worthwhile comes out...smile

Hugs, sis...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-16-2003 04:57 PM).]

Kaoru
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14 posted 2003-11-16 04:57 PM


I'm really not good at guessing, which is why I'm glad everyone else is doing it.

I really loved this a lot, well met, if you ask me.

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