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Smoke Signals |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The weather lends imputed veils On tacks of carpets catch the sails Through mists of static drops condensed The send of thoughts held back and fenced As heart sounds lift to points impaled The somber lilt of speech subdued Perked and simmered over brewed Until so fine the contents trail A whitest hush in smoke’s prevail And signaled heart sounds are renewed A pulse electric faint and fleet Soft the fingers rhythmic beat Light to air in feathered search Aloft in weightless language lurch Messages are hailed and viewed so sweet Copyright Kkh 11/16/03 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is a wonderful write!!!!!!!!! The images, the flow, the rhythm, the format ~ and the sweet messages!   Linda |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, I could almost see the messages floating....  Hugs Ethel |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yahuh, like these...like them all... The somber lilt of speech subdued Perked and simmered over brewed Until so fine the contents trail A whitest hush in smoke’s prevail |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Oh my ... this is stunningly lovely~ Such gentle lilting verse~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Just beautiful, TD. Patricia |
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