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Life is a river
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Life is a river |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. 
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Spring/Birth Flowing from the earth Unspoilt by the worlds refuse Thus it begins new Sping/Childhood Dancing across fields Sparkleing in the mid day sun Free from all lifes cares River/Adulthood Broad and powerfull Carrying boats on It's strong back Living life fully Delta/Old age The river fans out It is weary from travel It rests in the sea paladin |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Robert...Welcome Home...You have given me a huge smile tonight. Wonderfully written in the style for which you are known! Love these...absolutely love these!! Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Robert, I have missed your wisdom and it's nice to have you back with us. I love this piece. Your words always touch my soul and make me stop and think. And for that, I thank you. Hugs, Marti “Prayer makes the heart large enough until it can contain God’s gift of Himself.” |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Wow this is done so beautifully, I could really see the images....almost "merging" as one....nicely done Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, you descrie the circle of life ever so well and in every delta's place, a new spring will take its place with the minerals deep in the soil always! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Nice set! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paladin~ Can't think of anyone I'd rather find returning to these pages blue ... than you~ These are completely lovely~ My favorite - 'Delta/Old age The river fans out It is weary from travel It rests in the sea' Par excellence on all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 EXCELLENT! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Nice perspective. I really enjoyed your poem. Sadelite |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Can't miss the flowing feel of this write, Sir. Thank you. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Oh I love this. Darn fine bit of writing here. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Nice use of haiku! I love that form and you do it very well. Sparticus Even with insects- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice to read you as I wonder too about the Delta and aging...but hope for the experience ~smiling M |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow this was very nice! I love the ending. Loved the feeling of resolve, and serenity!! Very nice, indeed!  Love, Terri~  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Missing your wisdom, paladin. You always spoke truthfully. |
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