Open Poetry #29 |
Salvation |
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
My feet rest firmly on Earth yet my soul dwells in purgatory in eternal limbo. I walk the streets craving holistic salvation finding only endless questions and no answers. Anguished dirty I stagger into Our Lady Of Placebo 24 confessional and wedding chapel said "hail Mary" repetitiously and went on my way. I called to the manic doom prophets hurling brimstone from the street corners when I asked for answers proclaimed me damned and sent me away. I've mediated on many a full moon under Jade statures of Buddha and as of yet gleaned no enlightenment. Tired I sit on a old park bench feeding the pigeons As the world speeds by I find inner peace in this fleeting moment of solitude as my soul slowly finds its way home. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
I loved the write thanks for sharing Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sit on park benches too |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Brad...love it. I know this deep soul search. Been doing it all my life. Where is God...is there a God? I really don't know the answer to that one. Everyone tells me there is...and yet the only place I can find peace of mind is amongst the stars as I gaze through my telescope. Very well written poem sir. Glad I got a chance to read it. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I believe salvation can best be granted simply by keeping patient and still and watching the flying colors through the wind in a state of nirvana! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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