Open Poetry #29 |
Heelstuck |
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Heelstuck sorry to be stuck to your heel like this but you did say you hoped I'd never leave you just before you fed me to your dog [This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (11-14-2003 10:31 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ouchhhhhhie brutally honest...reminding me of someone I knew...loved and was most definately in love with once...maybe still am...in a way, a much better way...within the lessons learned. Good one |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling)... a sense of humor in the bleak and hurtful..... well done sir... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I misread your title... thought at first it was Heelstruck... After reading, that title seems applicable, too... for it certainly sounds as though you're not being appreciated and feeling kicked around. *S* Sad situation but excellent work! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OUCH!! Excellent thoughts put to pen James. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! At least you didn't die! ...and you lived to tell the tail! I mean "tale"! Gosh, that is not a pretty tail! I mean "tale"! Well, it is only fitting that she now has to contend with poo poo on her shoe shoe! Seriously speaking, I'm sorry that you were treated so 'poo'ly. I'm sending you healing hugs and something to scrape yourself off of the ground so that you can get back on your feet. EA |
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beckers716 Junior Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 39Ohio |
This is exactly how someone just made me feel. You captured it perfectly! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Wow! I guess she really stepped in it. This is great! ~K~ |
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