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Open Poetry #29

Hopelessness

Magic Solias
Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 73
California, USA

0 posted 2003-11-14 01:46 AM

HOPELESSNESS

As I spend
the remaining
hours of the day-

As I breath through
the late cold
fog night-

As I try to
remember
who I'm
supposed to be

I spend the
rest before
sleep
numbing myself
to pass out

Magic Solias

"we dream to love and love to dream"

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-11-14 01:49 AM

for about two weeks in the past I didn't sleep more then about 45 minutes through that entire 2 weeks and I depended on passing out to survive basically... you reminded me of that.
I hope things get better for you

this is very sad...

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-11-16 03:49 AM

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

3 posted 2003-11-16 09:00 AM

Hi Magic Solias. This is a very good piece. It reminded me of my own past. Well done!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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