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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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my heart is breaking can you hear it? My thoughts you keep taking can you feel it? My life you are trading is it worth it? My hand is shaking because you broken it. My tears are falling can't you see it? The truth pierces me like a knife,blood splatters all over my trembeling face My legs are weak they have no more space. My head is full no more information to take. The salt of the time is draining once more. the songs of the mind are playing ever more. Keep me safe from what lies ahead. Drape my face before I end up dead Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Magic Solias Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 73California, USA |
The painful truth of depression is described here very vividly. It's very dramatic and visual. I like it. Magic Solias |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
It happens to me once in awhile,thankfully poetry helps me get the depression to go away a little bit quicker. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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