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Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2003-11-13 06:17 PM

Thrashing the obstruction
Of the circular intrusion
Causing my mind to blister
Sugar coated whispers
Casting it's hex unawares
Blinding the failures of past
Axing my fingers while grasping
In all that withers unreached
Echoes lay screaming for peace
A mask knows the secrets
Boiling and bursting throughout
Like the popping of a birthday balloon
Etching out the twist of doomed fate
Laughing and dying for an escape
Seeing all bouncing off blue of you
Imprisoned beneath checked ropes
Tangled up in a mass of knowledge
Compressed within a never-ending melancholy
Of the truths spliced by others
Faces holding the pieces of me
Destined to be part of everything and nothing
Getting too attached to the emotions
Easiest to simply hate and be closed
Desperate to learn the balance of relation
As not to damage the depth within

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-11-13 08:48 PM

Compressed within a never-ending melancholy
Of the truths spliced by others
Faces holding the pieces of me
Destined to be part of everything and nothing
Getting too attached to the emotions

Good work Justbleu...I almost wish I couldn't relate so well.

Enjoyed~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-11-13 10:22 PM

I'll save this for another reading later tonight, in a much quieter moment, to let all the layers seep in, deep into my memory banks.
A soulful write, my friend.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-11-13 10:38 PM

Bridgette~
It is SO GOOD TO SEE YOU~

Thanks for the little bumpity-boop from the archives~

This is definitely a multi-read piece from you~

'Sugar coated whispers
Casting it's hex unawares
Blinding the failures of past'

You write so effectively ... it demands to be read again~
So ... I will~

Hope you are doing well, my friend~
Love ya'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-13 11:11 PM

I know how much easier it is to hate

glad to see you back again

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