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Lone Surrender
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Lone Surrender |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Thrashing the obstruction Of the circular intrusion Causing my mind to blister Sugar coated whispers Casting it's hex unawares Blinding the failures of past Axing my fingers while grasping In all that withers unreached Echoes lay screaming for peace A mask knows the secrets Boiling and bursting throughout Like the popping of a birthday balloon Etching out the twist of doomed fate Laughing and dying for an escape Seeing all bouncing off blue of you Imprisoned beneath checked ropes Tangled up in a mass of knowledge Compressed within a never-ending melancholy Of the truths spliced by others Faces holding the pieces of me Destined to be part of everything and nothing Getting too attached to the emotions Easiest to simply hate and be closed Desperate to learn the balance of relation As not to damage the depth within "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Compressed within a never-ending melancholy Of the truths spliced by others Faces holding the pieces of me Destined to be part of everything and nothing Getting too attached to the emotions Good work Justbleu...I almost wish I couldn't relate so well. Enjoyed~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'll save this for another reading later tonight, in a much quieter moment, to let all the layers seep in, deep into my memory banks. A soulful write, my friend. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bridgette~ It is SO GOOD TO SEE YOU~ Thanks for the little bumpity-boop from the archives~ This is definitely a multi-read piece from you~ 'Sugar coated whispers Casting it's hex unawares Blinding the failures of past' You write so effectively ... it demands to be read again~ So ... I will~ Hope you are doing well, my friend~ Love ya'~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know how much easier it is to hate glad to see you back again |
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