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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-11-10 12:07 PM


The Beauty In Your Heart


This is for you
that like to
criticize.

This is for those
that see the world
through jaded eyes.

As you read
these words let
me challange you.

Try to find
the beauty
in your heart.

The whole world
could be nice
if they
wanted
too.


JamesLee
November08
2003

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-11-10 09:35 AM


JamesMichael~
You know what ?
I am going to accept this challenge ... and find one new thing to love in this day~
Thank you my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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KristieSue
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2 posted 2003-11-10 09:53 AM


geez, if everyone could learn to do that, we'd all be MUCH better off for it.

Nice write, James

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-11-13 05:40 PM


Thank you Marge and Kristie...I appreciate your nice thoughts...James
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4 posted 2003-11-13 11:41 PM


a difficult challenge at this time for me, but I am trying. Your writing is thoughtful as always..enjoyed

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

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5 posted 2003-11-13 11:46 PM


good stuff
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