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Open Poetry #29

Twisted end to Sour Love

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-11-13 02:23 PM

Once upon a time
I did laugh
Hell even cry
But circumstance binds my soul
Now I am numb

The arrows don’t stop
They just don’t hurt
Anymore
As I lie in a pool of blood
Dying
I smile away to the last breath
As my numbness eats you

Until you too
Feel nothing
And smile big
Laughing hysterically
At a blank wall

But all good things must end
As I close my eyes forever
With a smile
As you are fitted for a straight jacket
Sitting in a thick padded cell
Singing sweetly
He loves me
He loves me not.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-11-13 02:39 PM

yep...you and me both

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-11-13 02:43 PM

I loved the darkness of this piece.

Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

WildPoet
Member

since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

3 posted 2003-11-13 02:49 PM

Wow! Crisp,sharp! Keeps you thinking long after the poems done!

WildPoet

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2003-11-13 03:18 PM

thank you

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