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Trash and Treasure |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra 
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I found it in a corner A little dusty, a little worn. It had been discarded Because it was a little torn. I picked it up, brushed it off I could see the shine. It would do just perfectly Because I had just lost mine. It fitted in the empty spot Like it was meant to be. I went out to show it off For everyone to see. The day seemed so much brighter Than it ever had before. All because of this little thing I found on the floor. This treasure isn't silver or gold But no money could part it from me. This second hand heart of mine Has truly set me free. Bec  "I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The cliche of "one man's trash... another man's treasure" gave you ample room for a poem... I like your second-hand heart, Bec. Enjoyed this very much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bec, Lovely and a delight to read. |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Sunshine... I hope it isn't too cliched... Thanks for reading. Seymour Tabin... I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, I loved writing it! Thanks guys! Bec "I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome theme! I really liked this one! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bec...Understanding this one on many levels...enjoyed! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
It's amazing that some of the simplest things bring us such great pleasure. Crystal |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Hey Bec this is great. I think you won't have to look too far for someone else who will love your second hand heart. I'm sure theres a cowboy out there just waiting to see you again!  D xo Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Passing Shadows... Thanks for reading. This one just seemed to write itself! Martie... Glad you enjoyed it. Actually, I've only just started to understand it on different levels myself! Crystal... I'm just a simple girl, and I have simple pleasures. Thanks for stopping by.Dee... What can I say but Thanks guys! Bec "I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bec~ This one slipped by me when I wasn't looking~ So pleased to read it now~ It's poignantly beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Personally I find anything one finds at Old Navy or Abercrombie & Finch trash and things that you find in the dumpster that have class and moral to them treasure too! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rebecca, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Bec this is lovely. First time I have read you...glad I did. Now I am going to have to keep watching for your nick in the future. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Marge... Glad you caught me this time around, and I'm so glad you like it. Noah... Awww... you always say the nicest things! Thank you so much. EvocativeVerse2... Thanks for reading, and I hope you like some of my other stuff too, when I get around to writing some more! Thanks guys! Bec "I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20 |
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