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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-11-13 06:05 AM



The wind has risen.
Change is in the air, gusting
Spinning thoughts off course

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-13 06:13 AM


it happens like that...just when you think you've got it nice and calm
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-11-13 07:01 AM


and i sense somethings coming, like snow at least........
LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-11-13 07:13 AM


and offcourse is maybe a place we're meant to go...sometimes the unknown can be a great gifted awakening for us.  

God one Lady, thank you for sharing.

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-11-13 08:48 AM


we are having at least 50mph winds this morning..blowing cold air  with the temperatures of 41 to drop 15 degrees by afternoon..everything is blowing everywhere...I  have already chased the wind (catching a few trash cans in the road)It is kind of scary listening to that wind howl.

so that was  my inspiration for today, thank you Dixie, Michele and Lee...and yes I do believe we may see a bit of snow  by the end of the day or tomorrow.

M

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5 posted 2003-11-13 09:14 AM


MorningMzWynter~
Brrrrrrr ... the Senyru, very effective ... the wind and cold ... too much~
Ya' know ... it really does make me glad I'm where I am ... wish you were here too~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2003-11-13 01:18 PM


Nicely done senryu.  I enjoyed it, I like the way the wind can spin your thoughts off course.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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