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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-11-09 02:47 PM



ice wind threads sunshine
through the golden fire flakes
Autumn's last hurrah

sun sheds molten tears
Winter's shock troops marching near
long nights' beginning

       ©2003 by icebox

© Copyright 2003 icebox - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-11-09 02:59 PM


You welcome each season with such grace.

I truly admire that. I can't wait to hear your thoughts on solstice. (I have a problem with proper worship on that particular holiday.)

Hope you are well m'friend. And btw? Thank you. You were a treat to read from the beginning and do not disappoint now, either.


Dark Angel
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2 posted 2003-11-09 03:29 PM


Love them both ice.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-11-09 04:28 PM


just perfect imagery..awestruck
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-11-09 04:42 PM


Wonderful!!  Just wonderful.
Love yet another new pic of you!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Martie
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5 posted 2003-11-09 04:54 PM


Gorgeous imagery, my friend!
misao
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6 posted 2003-11-09 06:29 PM


I like how it tells about nature because I can imagine it in my mind.


Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-11-09 08:03 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, though winter is not my favorite seaosn, I too welcome every season with open arms just as you do, yay! (big hugggssssssss) This is a precious set of haiku, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Magnus
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8 posted 2003-11-09 08:08 PM


You said it perfectly...and if my weather is
an indicator....the storm troops are near.

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-11-13 01:18 PM


I hate this time of year but love this write!
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