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For Her Time Stands Still
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For Her Time Stands Still |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 She looked at me as if to say, “Untie your apron and spill Out words tied up in its silence”. “Speak to me those precious words Rolling around in your Pocket of worn wisdom and wishes.” “Whisper to me Unspoken precious secrets, Only you and I share. "Release silly words caught In those raveled edges Of worried threads In your pockets of time." An apron now on a table, Gladly traded for an offered pen Dances freely directed By her hurried excitement. In her sweet eloquence She lets her story unfold in Characters, thoughts, plots Escaping through Imaginative whispers. Somehow she sees it in me Hidden there in my core. That quiet unspoken warmth Ignited by the pleasure Only she brings. Suddenly, just by saying, “Let’s write a poem!” She melts my heart, For her, Time stands still. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (11-12-2003 11:04 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This radiates with love! As you melt, so did I, when reading your words. Bless your heart, my Mysteria~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sharon, this made me cry as it is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, my grandma don't ever like to see me sad and she always knows how to bring a smile to my face and this poem brough back memories of her hanging clothes on the clothesline with her and just loving hearin what I say! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, the picture is gorgeous, she's a cute little girl, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
awwww !! Sharon this was so precious Hope |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have had this chatterbox for days now, and she is THE most inquisitive, imaginative child I think I have ever met. She loves "writing" poems and can rhyme way better than I can, but she can't even write yet LOL, so she makes them up and I write them and embellish them, it's fun! Thanks everyone, that is her sitting on a cliff by my house, pretty view there. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"Release silly words caught In those raveled edges Of worried threads In your pockets of time." ============================= How cool is that verse!!!!!! This whole write is delightful.... methinks you two are quite the team. A wonderful mix of musings poetess Sharon. Words break into splinters on the pages I write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
aw Sharon, ya can't touch this! This is just perfect and precious! Extremely well done lady! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now I know where this one resides... you not only make your granddaughter proud... but you spread your pride like a warm blanket, comforting us all. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, A delight to read.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes it does stand still, beatuifully expressed |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well written! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
See! She is good for me LOL, thanks everyone. She goes home today, and I bet I will miss her chatter although one day without it might just be what I need  |
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