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my_own_air New Member
since 2003-11-06
Posts 3 |
well i have joined here and i may say your poetry is very cool. this is one of my first poems i have ever written. you can critisize it, if you want or say nothing ... well however. here it is: -----*****----- I loved my life when i was child, i was having fun. And though that life won’t like me just for a while, but now know, that i was wrong, my hopes were in the sun. I’m alone and don’t belong to anyone. I knew he liked me, when he looked up in my eyes. I knew as one we’ll always be, but now i know, that those were only lies. I’m alone and don’t belong to anyone. I thought it would last forever our short relation-ship but now i see the truth was never, everything broke, nothing has keeped. I’m alone and don’t belong to anyone. I was crossing road and then i saw my ex-friend. There wasn’t crowd, I didn’t ask her for, i knew she wouldn’t lend. I’m alone and don’t belong to anyone. I know the difference between now and then, I don’t hope anymore every look is damned, and i’m a numb. Nothing less, nothing more. I’m alone and don’t belong to anyone. That doesn’n bother me. I’m totaly free, but I know, that my own life is one big stone. I’m alone and don’t belong to anyone. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good Morning and Welcome to Passions! Believe me you won't be alone for long here. We are a friendly family of poets. Take your time have a look around at the other forums and please enjoy yourself. Any questions, please feel free to email myself or one of the other moderators. Please check your email for a special greeting. Nancy. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MOA~ Welcome to the friendliest poetic circle on the entire Internet~ The read is sad ... but the repetition of 'I’m alone and don’t belong to anyone' ... very effective~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, there's always room for another loner in here. Welcome to Passions! |
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my_own_air New Member
since 2003-11-06
Posts 3 |
thanks for nice welcome  |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
 [This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-13-2003 10:34 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! You will enjoy it here very much - as Marge said, we're one of the friendliest groups on the Internet... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Well done. In time it comes a bit easier. Read all the poetry you can. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is a very sad write...but I can understand and relate well...I've been there and go back often to visit... Welcome to Passions  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
You can even be alone when ya rround a thousands, but one thing is sure never lie to ya heart but give it a smile. Great to meet ya a smile for the next day Smile Jes |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) This is a sad but heartfelt debut, sweet friend, know you are never alone and you are special to so many as we are all happy to be your friend here at Passions, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your heartfelt poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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