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A Moth to Woo
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A Moth to Woo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A moth of woo I saw a candles yellow light Dancing on a moonless night Beckoning me in flicks of bold To come and warm this soul so old It sent a lick of flame to me Peeling all the night that be And I sat down in trance of awe Warming to its very core And with the light a moth came too Lighting up in dazzling hue Sending heat into my face Heart and mind and mystic chase Saddled me with whispers fall Lulled me back to loves recall Placed a flower on my door Shed a tear my evermore. And I have placed this rusty Knight To swear an oath to her finite |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Saddled me with whispers fall Lulled me back to loves recall Placed a flower on my door Shed a tear my evermore." I know that moth. Evening Sy!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whatever time of day you say you have a Moth to woo I'll be looking, night or day to see what you pursue... ~*~ Good evening, Sy....  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are amazing ... day or night you set the screen a'blazing with perfect metered poetry to that OF COURSE a moth would agree~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your wit and woo, Is touching and true! ~ The Mothy One will fly high and happy in the glow of your friendship flame.  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan LOL she's quite a Moth. Sunshine Good evening love.  Marge, You are the amazing one. Earth Angel That's a diguise, she's really a butterfly. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and I do believe she will be most pleased when she flutters in!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, I'm still waiting. LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I stood beneath the star stained sky ... to wish a wish upon their sequined sigh. And whispered to the midnight moon ... hear these words spoken none too soon. I wished not for me, myself, nor I ... all I ask is for a verse to give to my Sy-guy. I requested rhymes to do him poetic justice for that is the promise that poetry entrusts us. Please ... a poem to call his own ... for in my heart, he's found a home. A cadenced line that might define ... the way he falls so gentle on my mind. If words but could they would find the way to say ... he is the sunshine on my shoulders each day. And should the words softly speak my heart ... they would say he's held it right from the start. Starlight ... star bright ... I wish I may ... I wish I might ... Write these words across the night ... Sy you are my guiding light.    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, That's good enought for Randy and me Just wanted to sweeten the tea It's a while since I pet the moth And put some taste into the broth. WWRS |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just know Janet is going to cherish this forever, sweet friend, you truly glow like a firefly when she is a moth always embracing the light of life, yay! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible! |
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Enigma Junior Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 11kadena, Japan |
A MOTH 2 WOO???? i have been writing 4 a while but just now am checkin out the writing sites. I dont get it U all confuse me, this is good dont get me wrong, BUT COME ON! It needs 2 have some street put in 2 it. Only God Can Judge Me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Always enjoy your comments, thank you. Brad, Thanks for the well done. passing, Enjoyed the remark. Enigma, LOL It's no enigma, it's Janet Marie. Thanks for the read and comment. |
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water_stained_wisdom Junior Member
since 2008-03-07
Posts 28 |
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