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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-11-12 06:24 PM

I sit out on the porch
Rocking in my rocking chair
Listening as the wind blows by
And listen as the crickets
Make their music glide through the air
And mix with the harmony of the frogs
Low ,gruff ribbits

Cold hands means a warm heart

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2003-11-12 06:25 PM

peaceful though...enjoyed it

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-11-12 06:26 PM

Cute....very nice picture you paint here!
Makes me wish for a seat on your porch swing.

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ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

3 posted 2003-11-12 06:36 PM

I always have that wish.

Those frogs are actually servants of this little sorcerer singing their own song to you.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2003-11-12 06:40 PM

I think this is one of the best Ive read from you....

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-11-12 08:08 PM

Julie~
Makes me want to get off the computer and go sit in my swing~

Sweet, hon~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-11-12 08:13 PM

Julie, very nice.
With a few tweaks,
you would have a Tanka!
Good work!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-11-12 08:31 PM

Oh, how I miss rocking away on my grandma's front porch! You brought back wonderful memories for me with your charming poem.

EA

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

8 posted 2003-11-12 08:45 PM

Very sweet

I like this.

:-)

Ribbit

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-11-12 10:14 PM

(smiles) Oh Julie, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love sitting with my grandparents out on the front porch every summer I come out to visit them, I am blessed they are still living so I can get to know all about them and their stories! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

WildPoet
Member

since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

10 posted 2003-11-12 10:20 PM

Yes! Thats what it's like back on the farm I grew up on!That was a fun trip back!

Thanks

WildPoet

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-11-13 04:01 AM

I wish I was there

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