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iwannarime22
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since 2003-10-25
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Rogers, Arkansas

0 posted 2003-10-28 06:44 PM



I prayed for you before we met,
Not knowing who you'd be.
I asked the Lord to send a friend.
One chosen just for me.

I asked that they'd be Godly,
With wisdom of His ways.
A friend to help and guide me
I the troubles of these days.

So often in life, we need someone
To listen while we talk.
Someone who will not condemn or judge,
But encourage us as we walk.

The narrow road we choose to follow
May sometimes make us stumble.
But to have a friend to catch our fall,
Teaches us to be humble.

When I asked the Lord to send a friend,
Though many came and went.
He gave much more than I ever asked,
For you are the friend He sent.


© Copyright 2003 Kim Pockat - All Rights Reserved
GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-10-28 07:04 PM


I'm praying the same prayer...
and still waiting for the who He sends.
I imagine its taking God alot of work to prepare someone for me and me for someone else!
This is a beautiful and touching piece... and I don't mean that sappy... but with all sincerity

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-10-28 11:09 PM


This is beautiful!!!
Love,
Terri~

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-10-28 11:13 PM


This is so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
4 posted 2003-10-28 11:23 PM


I've had very few friends like that, and I'll tell you right now I wouldn't trade any of them for anything you could offer.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
5 posted 2003-10-29 07:10 AM


We All Pray For Someone Like That And I'm Still Waiting Too LoL Nice Poem~!~Great Read

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
6 posted 2003-10-29 08:52 AM


Kim? this is lovely and yes finally I have been sent mine . . .
my son was the first to come
and now? my love . . .
Beautiful writing and forgive me
if I did not give you a proper welcome
Welcome to PIP!
xxoo

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
7 posted 2003-11-12 10:22 PM


ooo! oo! I wanna be that friend!

i hope your prayers are answered. i have to admit.. on very very rare occasions i have been known to sneak a quick prayer or two.. but dont tell anyone i told you that!!

;-p

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-11-12 10:28 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, keep praying and keep the faith, for if you book hope, it will come! (smiles) This is a beautiful prayer, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kim, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
9 posted 2003-11-13 04:02 AM


a thought-provoking and beautiful write
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