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the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-11-12 10:11 PM


You walk along a long path
Through trees that you feel
Are eveloping you
You look around at the scenery around you
As you walk the old river trail

You see little pieces of athe past
As you walk past an old cracker village
Which is now a ghost town
Until a fesitval comes through
As you walk the old river trail

You see where horses have taken the path
Because you have to avoid walking into their mess
As you walk the old river trail

You approach the river
Of icy, clear water
And just stare in awe
Even though you only see algae on the bottom
As you walk the old river trail

There are benches near the water
You sit and take it all in
You hear the nature around you
As you sit on a bench on the old river trail

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-11-12 10:18 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may you always sit there and find peace overing all around you and tranquility sing in your heart! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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Canada
2 posted 2003-11-12 10:21 PM


Sounds like my kind of place.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10
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California
3 posted 2003-11-12 10:27 PM


Well, You did it again! Now I want to go hiking!

Thanks

WildPoet

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4 posted 2003-11-13 04:01 AM


nice...you are growing well in your writings
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