Open Poetry #29 |
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Old River Trail |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA ![]() |
You walk along a long path Through trees that you feel Are eveloping you You look around at the scenery around you As you walk the old river trail You see little pieces of athe past As you walk past an old cracker village Which is now a ghost town Until a fesitval comes through As you walk the old river trail You see where horses have taken the path Because you have to avoid walking into their mess As you walk the old river trail You approach the river Of icy, clear water And just stare in awe Even though you only see algae on the bottom As you walk the old river trail There are benches near the water You sit and take it all in You hear the nature around you As you sit on a bench on the old river trail Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may you always sit there and find peace overing all around you and tranquility sing in your heart! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Sounds like my kind of place. ![]() What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Well, You did it again! Now I want to go hiking! Thanks WildPoet |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice...you are growing well in your writings |
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