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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA 
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I Fight I Cry I Forgive You Over And over Again. You Leave My Soul Stained Everytime You Explain. I m Tired Of The deceit It Leaves me Cradles me In This Feeling Of Defeat |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
soiled? or just spent? either way, there's a lot of explosive energy pouring down the page here. Welcome to Pip! |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
both in where this is concerned..thank you for your comment...  glad you could feel from my words. There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rianda~ This is a powerful purge~ The reader could indeed feel it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very hurtful thing to go through. Feels so bad to be the one feeling this. Love, Terri~  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Hi there, Rani. I'm glad I got to read your post. I've felt the same way before, only to realize that as long as you can shout those words, you are NOT defeated. Keep shouting those words to express yourself. Sadelite |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Rianda, this is so heartaching, dearest friend, I send many angel hugs your way in hope for comfort to ease this heart and for you to feel clean inside! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rianda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Rianda well isn't this quite the write. I am glad I got the chance to look it over. Normally I do not pop in on weekends to read the other writers verses...lucky for me I did tonight though. 8-) I like the basic concept of this poem...the idea from which it was birthed. I'd like to see you play with it a little more though. Stretch out the moment...make my heart wedded to yours as you take me through the haunted memories that you would pem to the blank space. I am not saying what you have here is not good mind you! In truth it is a wonderful expression of you. I just would like to be pulled along for a little while longer...call me greedy! (Wink!) Well done my friend! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know this too well very sad |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
TO Everyone who replied , I am so sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you.... Marge: thank you , please to know my words came off the page as intended. Shara: thank you for understanding.. i appreciate you commenting.sadelite:I shall..continue shouting!! thank you Angel: wow..you are the sweetest..thing for saying such kind things to me. May everything that is good in this world....com e to YOU EvocativeVerse:thank you for taking time to comment and give your advice...longer huh? hmmmmm I shall put this on the drawing board and see what I can do. thanks. Passing shadows: my heart is heaving knowing you can relate....im sorry dear. thank you for commenting. There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
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