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What Forever Was
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What Forever Was |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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It's five O'clock in the morning first night alone's slipped away the curtains on the open window flutter as the breeze's play I stare out at the dim lit street gazing through the falling rain as I sit here thinkin why we said good-bye yesterday. Chorus: we got caught up in each other wonderin what the future holds just two lonely souls together hiding in each others hope searching for the magic feeling they call one and only love we fooled ourselves believing we knew what forever was... In two more hours I leave this room fade into the working day I'll see you around sometime but things'll never be the same Still I wish I could hold you now one more time to ease the pain cause this emptiness I must confess has filled my heart again. Chorus: we got caught up in each other wonderin what the future holds just two lonely souls together hiding in each others hope searching for that magic feeling they call one and only love we fooled ourselves believing we knew what forever was |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good morning Ethome. I heard your song, came in to see, and to wish you a wonderful Sunday. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, this is a beautifully written heartache Eric! I would love to hear this one sung. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I loved this. It's such a forgiving set of words put together. Just a look back but not with angry words, but with an endearing thought of the other. Sometimes it doesn't always work out, but it's good to leave with a gentle thought of what used to be. Lovely, lovely outlook!!! Sending a hug.  I know this is hurtful, but at least you can remember with kindness.How wonderful is that!Love, Terri~  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...A beautiful, lyrical poem! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Eric, the rain and the words of chorus do loudly speak of what is desired... Excellent write.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is no forever...but sometimes it's nice to make believe great little sad song here, as usual |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I liked this one... I guess the perspective must rule the thought I believe in forever...it's the indelible mark on the heart...with or without TD |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Eric, this is so very heartfelt, swet friend, I always love reading your song lyrics and can't wait to have a CD of your material, yay! (smiles) I have been posting country song lyrics I've written these past few weeks I think you may enjoy too, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I felt this one sweet poet man... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Great lyrics! A wonderful song and oh so true to life Thank you! Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ I feel this one ... deeply touching~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'll see you around sometime but things'll never be the same Still I wish I could hold you now one more time to ease the pain Softly sighing, really love the way you write, ethome. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write...absolutely love this! Hope your birthday is a great one! hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eric, this is close to the heart for me just now. Sometimes I wonder was it the right decision. Can we go back or do we move on. Don't mind me, I'm rambling. Just know that this touched me. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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