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Open Poetry #29
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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
0 posted 2003-11-09 12:07 PM


Moments blend into the night
something is no longer right

Our words hold no meaning
simple phrases tossed back and forth

Hollow is our communication
I wonder if you had the same realizations

The clock ticks the time away
seconds turn into days

We make our feeble attempts to ease the pain
but the fact is our love has faded away

Maybe just maybe if we wait long enough
what was once lost will return this way

If this is possible then
pigs will fly on that day

Rogue
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-11-09 12:09 PM

love the last lines!
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2003-11-09 09:04 AM

You render the atmosphere perfectly.
Sad though.
Love, Margherita
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-11-09 09:06 AM

You say it well.
Love,
Terri~
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