Open Poetry #29 |
Fill me |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Fill me Patience eludes me. I look for you everywhere and listen to every tiny sound. I thirst for you. I am a dry lake burning in midday heat. Answer my song of desire! Come to me! Flow into me, river of Love, jumping down joyously from the Source. Satiate my yearning heart. Fill my emptiness and allow me to be your mirror. Pour your light into my eyes so that I may shine as One with you. Out of the vastness of silence a secret tune is born and moves towards me. In delirious pleasure I receive you. Here, now, I keep you within and I thirst no more. You have watered my garden and I blossom in delight. I touch the Sun and glisten in its light. All anxiety is gone. Now, that you have come. |
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Magic Solias Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 73California, USA |
Pure like a fresh spring in the high mountains. Sounds like true love to me. Also a very nice picture, goes really good with the text. "mystery is beauty"
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow, this could very well be a very passionate poem to a lover....for the words can go either way.... Loved this, excellently composed... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ Now just how lovely is this ? Very ! Your thoughts flow effortlessly to bring such beauty to us~ Thank you dear friend for sharing such word-thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Beautiful this is! Warm, and loving. Love, Terri~ |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
That one described in those words is a lucky one, cause true love can only come with a caring heart, this is it. Smile Jes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A beautiful flow...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo enchanting, sweet friend, yay! (does happy dance) I love it, sweet friend, and may nymphs and faeries forever flitter in your happy garden of your heart! (kiss on cheek) I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Margherita ... WOW! This is an amazing write filled with such hot passion. Nice to be here again to read your poems. This one is exceptional. Hugs, Marti |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is SO gorgeous! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you my dear poet friends for your warmth. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This absolutely wonderful. Beautiful images wrapped in a tender plea. Patricia |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your poem is filled with passion and beauty! Much enjoyed! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm so glad this was brought back to the top. Thank you for your lovely, lovely words. And the waterfall? I personally know how lovely they can be... |
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