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Rain and Rainbows
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Rain and Rainbows |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rain and Rainbows The rain has washed the dust of day And made a rainbow in the stay Playing cupid in the sky Placing treasure in its lie Misting gently o’er the green Making wiles and gentle dream Crystal vapors pouring flow All the buds to flowers grow. Feel the rain upon your skin Let it play your lanolin Sooth you to a childish glee Let it wash your eyes to see. Let it drink and let it sink Let it form a living link Let it weave a shawl of lace Let it wash your lovely face. It will clean you through and through Let it coup you, to renew. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
It will clean you through and through Let it coup you, to renew.'''' SY~ I love the rain....this is so refreshing....what a "peace" to wake up too...Morning...  Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Feel the rain upon your skin Let it play your lanolin Sooth you to a childish glee Let it wash your eyes to see." Good morning Sy. Thanks for the  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
top of the morning mr smiling face and heart...this was genuine and so very much a part of you and me, this wonderfully enriching world, and all dust that forever and always settles. Smiles and huggles |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, goodmorning  I'm here early today. I like the rain, too..looks like it here in my part of Florids, too. Have a good day, my friend.  Hugs   Ethel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll take a bucket of that rain, and a slide of that rainbow, please. Aw Sy, you've got me smiling my morning awake. Thank you. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully soul-refreshing poem, Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Good morning Seymour. Very well done. Your too cheerful for me though...grumble, grumble! Dang morning people! Oh wait there is that time zone change between us...and the fact I don't get home from work 'til 12:30 AM most mornings here...oh yeah add to that I have had only had 3 hours but in 20 minutes I have to take my 6 year old daughter to school. No wonder I am a grouch! LOL! Just kidding my friend...about being a grouch that is. The poem is great. Love the meter, love the message. Excellent job my friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Let it drink and let it sink Let it form a living link Let it weave a shawl of lace Let it wash your lovely face." Morning Sy! Yes..exactly why I love the rain. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, Thank you SWEET. Duncan A smile, is a smile, is a smile,  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 !!!...fait accomplis! Mission accomplished!  Thank you, m'dear sonneteer for this morning's celestial present! The smile that you just put on my face shall last throughout the day! If my smile begins to wane, I will return to read your enchanting and wondrous write!  Happy rainbows!  EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-06-2003 09:19 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good morning dear and may it be a good one. Ethel, It's raining in my part of florida too. Hugs Sunshine, I love to make you smile. Hugs scorpio, You are a sweetheart. EvocativeVerse2, It's my pleasure to have people like you read it, thank you. Susan, May I offer you a towel. LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write this morn Sy! Want to take a walk in the rain with me? Come..we'll slide on over the rainbow! This is a keeper for my 'Sy Guy' folder. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~  ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, Ya know you really are a delight.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, I'll accept both. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The rain has washed the dust of day And made a rainbow in the stay Playing cupid in the sky Placing treasure in its lie Misting gently o’er the green Making wiles and gentle dream Crystal vapors pouring flow All the buds to flowers grow. Feel the rain upon your skin Let it play your lanolin ================================ Ive said it before and will say again... your rhymes are the rainbow confetti and the pot of gold in my day. Sorry Im late Sy-babes...been one of those days...got any winkies and smooches left for me?  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy, An excellent rendering, very refreshing. Thanks. Doc |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Missed you all day and don't you know you're my main smooch. How would you like them, hot cold or bold. LOL WWRS vandana Thank you dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr.Moose1 Thank you, thank you for the read and comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"How would you like them, hot cold or bold." ---------------- ALL of the above. haha ... I'll like em reeeeeeaaaaalllly Randy LOL |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
Liking rainbows much, this poem easy to like also. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Let it play your lanolin A new musical instrument in the making? Excellent write Sir Sy....well done. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
almost too pretty to end, a lovely walk in a sunshower......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You got em for real. From Randy and me. kiss:Lotus Breeze A lovely comment. Magnus If you can play a cream, I guess it is. LOL inkedgoddess, Now that's an answer. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, sadly we don't get many rainbows here in Colorado because...well...we get little rain, but when I was in Ireland, I got to see a mahnificent seraphic double one! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, it was literally bursting right through me, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Funny but I saw one when I was in Irland too. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
One shouldn't be last to reply, I find! Everyone has taken mine. Refreshing was the word I was going to use. I liked this one for its flow and simplicity. Sadelite |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite A good and welcome reply, thank you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The images you paint dance in my mind and I feel the magic of it. Beautiful, dear Seymour! Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you my dear for the read and sweet reply. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, it feels like forever that I've been able to sit and have tea with you and the girls and read your insightful and delicious poems. This one completely stole my heart! Hugs, Marti |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Interesting as always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I could use one of those right now...nice writing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, You are a love. Thomas, Thank you for the ead and comment. Passing, Thank you for the nice. |
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