Open Poetry #29 |
What If I Ask and What Would You Say |
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
If I reached out my hand Would you take hold? If I were cold Would you give me warmth? If I was hurt Would you comfort me? If I said I loved you Would you hate me? |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
There are many hidden feelings and tellings in this, as i read it there is a long tsory that has been told between the lines. Smile But i wouldnt think taht anyone could hate, because they got to know that they are loved. Smile again Jes |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Seems like a searching for the real truth about how someone feels about you. I hope it's all you are hoping for. Love, Terri~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes things are better left alone...but whatdoIknow? |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
sometimes these things are all we need to know, right? enjoyed the thoughts this gave me. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
yes, yes, yes, and no |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
It amazes me how your four questions can conjure up brain hidden images so quickly. The power of questioning is the ultimate... I've enjoyed all of your posts that I just happened upon. I'm looking forward to reading more. Sadie |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
hmmmmmmm....the last lines made me suck in my breath...because I lived that episode.. Very good piece, Froggy Girl! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) I sure hope good fortune comes your way this time around, sweet friend, may you ask and may he respond with truth and heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, swet E.J, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you all for the wonderful comments. When one seeks the answer.... Its often found within the question. :-) |
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