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Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion

0 posted 2003-11-08 03:48 PM


Remember that I am out here.
These hopes have become a slow burning fire
making me all too restless
for that final point of impact.
I have lost my soul in battles it seems
and souless ones do not know
how to take care of hearts
that they never asked for.
Remember that I tried to be your friend
and if you can think for one moment
on the laughter
instead of when my silence was exploding in your heart
then I would be grateful
and you will have conquered demons in yourself
that I never could in my own.
It makes you stronger than me.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-11-08 04:50 PM


This is so hauntingly beautiful Siofra.
Good to read you here once again.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2003-11-08 06:24 PM


I love the hopes have become a burning fire.

Beautiful.

Love, Margherita

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-11-09 09:17 PM


I know just what you speak about. I tried to be a friend to one with no strings attached, just be there for them. Year after year I was shown I wasn't good enough to be in their company and I never gave them reason to doubt me until AFTER they kept treating me with blatant out right disrespect as a human being. I would just look past that and try to show I would be there even when they weren't doing right, but it was taken as being weak rather than a gesture of un-conditional heart toward them. All the best to you and your efforts. I know there are some that no matter what you do it's not good enough. It's not easy to go through this kind of hell. sending a hug for what I know is a very hurtful place to dwell in your heart, and mind, and soul.
Love,
Terri~

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-11-09 11:59 PM


Enjoyed...James
Kahlil
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5 posted 2003-11-10 12:08 PM


This one really touches home for me....it really "gets me".  ~K~
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