Open Poetry #29 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
within this hushed silence I heard myself sing the sky bellowed shrieking caw of nightengale I lay down my heart, softly within your palm and you took of it, smiling as you did giving back to me . . . your own setting it upon the one which now lay in your hand molding them like clay an artist's touch until they were but one work of art to be brandished and set in the finest of galleries |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"molding them like clay an artist's touch until they were but one work of art" And the rest of us stand in silence admiring the pure beauty of it.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The "medium" is far beyond medium! Lovin' hugs and knowing smiles, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
And might I add, that I love that hint of the mysterious in your new pic! |
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rambling_words Junior Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 44London, Ontario, Canada |
How unique, I liked. John |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I lay down my heart, softly within your palm '''' This is so very tender-- you have a beautiful expression about you... hugsss Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So tender...so love-filled..I am in awe. You both are so blessed. ~Hugs to you pretty lady~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan My goodness . . . not in awe . . . but thank you Linda you are so sweet thank you that mysterious I like too *smile* far from medium, yes Hey John, Welcome to PIP sorry I missed your entrance thank you Lauren, thank you so much, so sweet Hugs to YOU pretty lady thank you Nancy Thanks guys xxoo |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
The molding of two hearts into this... Possible, only if both are pliable...yielding to the other. Just a hint of mystery? Hmmm Love you! Ed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue...how beautiful this coupling! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
medium well done |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
A masterpiece in the making...smile This is so very beautiful, Sue I absolutely love it Hugs and much love... When the power of love overcomes the |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beatifully written and expressed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When LOVE is the artist the creation is perfect .... as you show with your wondrous words. I love you. Margherita |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful and tender. Maree. fate is not just |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Baby? they are/have been pliable it is your hands I sopeak of the artist . . . thank you yes mystery lol love you too Thank you Martie HA! Dix awesome response thank you Hugs and Love to you,my sister thank you so much, Vic Thank you Lee Margherita, so very true love you thank you Thank you Maree Thanks guys xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Upon this Passions gallery you sure have an entire south wall with wonderful works of art to be displayed in forever exhibition! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleWing~ This is as gentle a read as I'll see this day~ Delicately portrayed ... enjoyed immensely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
"One work of art" Do you know what this means? Soul mates! |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
beautiful enjoyed it. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah you always bump my stuff , thank you so so much aww Marge that was so sweet of you thank you Thank you James Thank you V! ahhh Julia yes yes yes indeed FINALLY thank you Thank you am . . nice to see you reading me Thanks guys xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
molding them like clay an artist's touch until they were but one work of art to be brandished and set in the finest of galleries beautiful words, and sentiment....... no need to set it in stone, set it in a pliable substance for now and let it grow and breathe along the way........ stone is stone, love is love and the two dont jive for me, at least, anyhow........ feel the floyd, feel the love |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele, I am finally . . . feeling the floyd *smile* thank you xxoo |
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