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Crimson Rain
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Crimson Rain |
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misao Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 50 |
the angels sing the heavens cry for mercy as for the crimson rain, what was the cause of this? Have they lost their dainty wings or were they just alone? the sky is no longer a shade of blue and the bloodstains of angels on my shirt begin to grow more and more. The white clouds depart-- the sky turns bright red-- the crimson rain drips upon my ballad, with it still in my hand... it gently dribbles on my face-- I looked as if I were shedding tears of crimson as the breeze just blew me away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very nicely written entrance piece. There is much to see here at Passions.. Take your time..look around, read, sign and most of all, have fun! Please check your email for a special greeting. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Misao~ WELCOME to Passions~ Lovely entrance ... you'll find us highly addictive, lots of fun, and bookoodles of talent~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very compelling dream, one that screams "understand what I'm trying to tell you!" So many of us dream in color - while others only in film noir. An excellent read. Welcome to Passions!!! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I looked as if I were shedding tears of crimson as the breeze just blew me away." excellent! I do love the imagery here and welcome! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
welcome to Passions, and yes, let us hope that it is but a dream... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions...I enjoyed your first poem. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What a lovely entree... Welcome to Passions in Poetry - Settle in and make yourself comfy - You'll love it here...  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
What a beautiful entrance! Welcome to PIP misao . . . and the bloodstains of angels on my shirt begin to grow more and more. as they do on my very own they seem to be a part of me now, the angels  This is dark beauty xxoo |
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Magic Solias Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 73California, USA |
wonderful writing. May this dream never come true. Looking forward to your next post.
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our family! You've written a vivid dream here. Crimson angel tears...wow..that's really great. I look forward to reading more from you!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Passions. This is a very impressive write! Love, Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssssss) This is a powerful and heartaching debut, dearest friend, this reminded me so much of Peter Gabriel's "Red Rain" that touches on a similar theme, you've spoken of the anguish and the struggle for salvation so well! Welcome to Passions, sweet Misao, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your powerful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now can I tell you how proud I am of you? You are an amazing writer and an even more amazing daughter. I love you Kris.  (oh hush, just deal with it!  ) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very vivid write here, but yes, it could have been a dream too...who knows? Welcome to Passions! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful entrance! I loved the imagery, and the presentation. In welcoming you, I read some of the other replies, and am not surprised by your poetic talent, just thankful that you've joined us.  WELCOME!I think I see a mom glowing. |
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misao Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 50 |
^_^ Thanks to all of you. I hapo I can be inspired some more from anime, games, etc.. >.< Mother please! (Serenity) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
it gently dribbles on my face-- I looked as if I were shedding tears of crimson as the breeze just blew me away. Could it all have been just a dream? Misao, this is a wonderful first post. I really enjoyed reading it. It kept me rushing to see what was going to happen next... (your Mom's poetry does me like that too.) I'm really glad that you decided to join us here at PIP. I can tell that you're going to like it. Hugs to you  Ethel  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
If you have your mothers' eyes (as surely you must), you will gain inspiration from everything around you....Just keep your eyes open. Loved this write, by the way. ~yeti |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I just read her comments, and I am about to bust! smile..."mother please" indeed! kris? you blow me outta the water...  (and I'll stop embarrassing you Kris, I'm sorry----NOT!!!)  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful to see you here, misao....I sure liked your poem! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A dream, a fantasy, a vision...James |
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Varuch Elohim Junior Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 41Italy |
Great Job! Varuch Elohim |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderful first post, welcome ... |
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