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Magnus
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0 posted 2003-11-08 01:24 PM


If love were grown  as lips did taste
the wine of labors fruit delicately,
delightedly
                upon the
                            waking
       morn?

Would the memory of this
upon the bud of tongue
be savored
                again, yet again?

If from this love, this mome of pure
bliss, could dreams be made of
unending desire among the flickering
flames of
               roving passions?

Take my hand....

Let us see...



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1 posted 2003-11-08 01:32 PM


Ooooh *SIGH*

Beautiful Barry...you just keep getting better!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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2 posted 2003-11-08 01:33 PM


Nancy....I would have bet the ranch that this
would bring down south a big sigh.... Oh
yes indeeedeeee....

Thanx Magic Lady....

Jes
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3 posted 2003-11-08 01:38 PM


Let Us See....If We....

You two will bee --- You two will bee.

Smile

Jes


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4 posted 2003-11-08 01:43 PM


If from this love, this mome of pure
bliss, could dreams be made of
unending desire among the flickering
flames of
               roving passions?

Take my hand....

Let us see...



Oh yes, Barry...

*and another SIGH*


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-08-2003 01:44 PM).]

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5 posted 2003-11-08 01:44 PM


Magnus~

And another *sigh*~
Yes siree bobtail~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Magnus
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6 posted 2003-11-08 01:54 PM


Sending fans and firetrucks.....

Thanx ladies...

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7 posted 2003-11-08 11:23 PM


what an invitation!
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8 posted 2003-11-08 11:27 PM


Awww now how can your lady refuse..Sweet words that would move her to take your hand.
Lovely as can be. Very nice. Wow the 3rd one to leave a kiss for 2 to share.
Love,
Terri~

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9 posted 2003-11-09 12:45 PM




(smiles) This is soooooooo beautifully passionate, sweet friend, and shall you find all these answers in the form of you both, yay! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Patricia
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10 posted 2003-11-09 08:13 AM


It seems, my dear Magnus, you are collecting sighs.  Rightfully so with this poem.  Here is another for your collection...**SIGH**  

You need to be teaching a class in the art of romance...and I am not talking a 101 here.  It would have to be an upper level course!

Patricia

Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2003-11-09 08:34 AM




Very *sigh* worthy.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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12 posted 2003-11-09 02:12 PM


And another  *SIGH*
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13 posted 2003-11-09 02:58 PM


*Sigh* couldnĀ“t help it.....but I am the next sigher in line

((hugs))
Charisma

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14 posted 2003-11-10 10:16 AM


I felt a breeze and had to see why... it's all these sighs! *G*

This is lovely, Magnus... *S*

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15 posted 2003-11-10 10:41 AM


a very hopeful future beginning...lovely flowers sent along through your words!
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