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Shadows World
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Shadows World |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Shadows world Shadows lance amorphous walls Catching raucous echoes calls Sending phantoms changing flights Making spirits dance the night Spilling memories water fall Delusions dancing on the wall Shunting as a vaulting bat Silent as a stalking cat And yet they raise illusions tune With flutes that paint the mystic moon For it is drawing on the core To open up Pandora’s door I feel the heat of permeate I see the dancing bones that wait The grins of acids grim decay Nor can I scream or get away Lord help me in this awesome seem This purgatory haunts my dream It follows me wherever I go With seeds within my mind to sew And when it grows it flowers blue And odes me with its hours coup |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good Morning Sy...Happy Monday a very thoughtout full of images write...You have created a vast array of what life has in store for us if we accept....if we allow...and yet the good news is...we're the pilot who are unlimited in an unbound world, if we so prefer. Your amazing.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...yet they raise illusions tune With flutes that paint the mystic moon For it is drawing on the core To open up Pandora’s door ~*~ They most certainly do. Wake up Sy... Tea and croissants...for everyone! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Lots of images swirling around in this morning's write, Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Did you have bad dreams last night Sy? Here....black currant tea will fix you right up. And...I do love your rhyme this morn. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Shadows lance amorphous walls Catching raucous echoes calls Sending phantoms changing flights Making spirits dance the night Spilling memories water fall Delusions dancing on the wall Shunting as a vaulting bat Silent as a stalking cat And yet they raise illusions tune With flutes that paint the mystic moon For it is drawing on the core To open up Pandora’s door I feel the heat of permeate I see the dancing bones that wait The grins of acids grim decay Nor can I scream or get away ========================== Pandora only wishes she could write as well as this....just look at you working those rhymes and letting the words dance. Shadows lance amorphous walls Catching raucous echoes calls Shunting as a vaulting bat Silent as a stalking cat I feel the heat of permeate I see the dancing bones that wait The grins of acids grim decay   YOUR Rhymes ROCK and it rolls me  *ww*   |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I have to tell you that I just love these shadows from you~ 'Spilling memories water fall Delusions dancing on the wall Shunting as a vaulting bat Silent as a stalking cat And yet they raise illusions tune With flutes that paint the mystic moon' WOW ...~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are a sweetheart. Sunshine, You are a dear. scorpio Thank you, thank you. Nancy, Comes with the territory. JM, Randy wrote you a poem he'll put it in tomorrow. WWRS :squeeze; Marge Love you too. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile is it the shadows of our inside dream. or maybe just a dream to tell that sometimes we should live dreams out and do like we feel instead of following, the road thats described. Smile, maybe my prediction of your poem was not the real thing, but it was what it started in mee. Thanks and another smile Jes |
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